Let me see your life in flames

Let me see your life in flames,
Never close and never friends,
Just was freedom to defend -
That's your choice, my dear lad.

Born to live, to dive and see
What is far, behind the sea,
Under water burns your soul
I'd love to see it ever more.

Never close and never soon
Will I feel the same to you,
Let me see the flame in depth,
A way of freedom for the health...

P.S. Мое первое стихотворение на английском. Прошу указать на грамматические ошибки, если есть:)


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