In the shadows,
He’s alone walking fast into dark of night,
Never asking,
How long he will walk and if path is right,
Feeling careless,
Feeling cold from a heart of steel,
In the shadows,
He will die but he will not kneel.
Souls are burning,
People kill, people rape, people turn to sand,
Cries are silent,
Painful dreams, broken hopes all throughout the land,
Never asking,
Should he care, should he make things right,
In the shadows,
He’s alone walking fast into dark of night.
Freedom’s calling;
Raise your head and than look around,
Is this pointless;
Can they change if they hear a sound,
Never asking,
Why he cares, why he’ll make things right,
In the shadows,
He’s alone walking fast from the dark of night,
Shadow Walker
© Copyright: Станислав Стэн, 2013
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I really liked the progression of emotions from being careless and lost to having hope and a glimpse of optimism. This could definetly be a great song! Maybe blues-based metal? Led Zepplin’s “Babe I’m gonna leave you” comes to mind.
Изабель Марант 18.03.2014 00:39 • Заявить о нарушении
Изабель Марант 18.03.2014 00:39 • Заявить о нарушении
I'm impressed Isabel :)
This is exactly what it was planned as (metal song). I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Feel free to check out my other stuff.. although it probably wouldn’t be as poetic as this particular attempt on writing a song. I wrote music for it too, but it has been way way too long ago :)
Станислав Стэн 18.03.2014 01:45 Заявить о нарушении
This is exactly what it was planned as (metal song). I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Feel free to check out my other stuff.. although it probably wouldn’t be as poetic as this particular attempt on writing a song. I wrote music for it too, but it has been way way too long ago :)
Станислав Стэн 18.03.2014 01:45 Заявить о нарушении
It's kind of obvious that this would be a metal or a hard rock song, but i think it should go slower, мелодичный metal (if this makes any sense to anyone but me). Oh, and don't forget a guitar solo ;) Do you have a recording of this song? I'd like to hear it
Изабель Марант 18.03.2014 07:45 Заявить о нарушении
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It was meant to be more like a metal ballad, so you're right :)
Unfortunately I didn't record any of it. All of the stuff written in English is very old. From high school and early college days. I haven't touched guitar in like 15 years. I also haven't written anything in English since then. All the stuff I wrote here in Russian is in the past year or less.
Станислав Стэн 18.03.2014 16:55 Заявить о нарушении
Unfortunately I didn't record any of it. All of the stuff written in English is very old. From high school and early college days. I haven't touched guitar in like 15 years. I also haven't written anything in English since then. All the stuff I wrote here in Russian is in the past year or less.
Станислав Стэн 18.03.2014 16:55 Заявить о нарушении
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