Кто знает английский? Много ли здесь грамматических ошибок?
When i can see your foto with a smile, i smile too,
Because your eyes are shining every moment.
Your voice in your native language do,
My dreams more pretty and important.
Your lips are perfect too,
But what inside?
I wanna open your soul...
And I believe in miracles,
I hope, that you'll write,
A little comment to my ode.
Ok, I think, it's good enough,
I ask, don't break, don't break my heart!
Помогите!!!
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