My heart is melting, when you look at me this way.
I do believe that in a couple of days
You won`t regret that our date
Has gone so far, and we are bate
over the poppy field, preparing to tempt fate.
Waiting for the rainbow, we`ve forgotten slicker.
Does it even matter, as we are together?
Entwined bodies are trembling,
We are waiting for wonder,
Let it be love under the thunder.
Love
© Copyright: Анна Хонькина, 2013
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Dear Anna,
Please consider the following revision
My heart is melting, when you look at me this way.
I do believe that soon, in а couple of days
You won`t regret that our date
Has gone so far, and we are bate
Over the poppy field, in the attempt to tempt our fate.
Waiting for the rainbow, we`ve forgotten slicker.
Does it even matter, as we are together?
Entwined bodies are trembling,
We are awaiting for a wonder,
Let it be love under the thunder.
Принцалександр 06.09.2013 06:39 • Заявить о нарушении
Please consider the following revision
My heart is melting, when you look at me this way.
I do believe that soon, in а couple of days
You won`t regret that our date
Has gone so far, and we are bate
Over the poppy field, in the attempt to tempt our fate.
Waiting for the rainbow, we`ve forgotten slicker.
Does it even matter, as we are together?
Entwined bodies are trembling,
We are awaiting for a wonder,
Let it be love under the thunder.
Принцалександр 06.09.2013 06:39 • Заявить о нарушении
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