Previously published by me ( as all other my English poetry ) on other sites under the name princeAlexander / princealexander .
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I'm in love with Juanita
From El Paso country song ...
Kiss me stronger, senorita,
Make my memories be gone.
To forget the northern beauty,
Who's cold heart is made of stone,
Kiss me stronger, Spanish cutie,
Give me love I missed so long.
Brown eyes so warm and tender,
Margaritaville from blender
Makes it easy to surrender,
Borrowing love from lovely lender.
Do not check my credit rating,
- I am all anticipating ...
Give me love that I am awaiting,
Make my loneliness abating!
Rambling rose from Spanish garden,
Do not let my heart to harden.
Harden only what can please,
- I am down on my knees.
I'm in love with Juanita
From El Paso country song ...
Kiss me stronger, senorita,
Make my memories be gone.
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See Russian "white poetry" translation of this piece at:
http://stihi.ru/2012/11/27/1504
Also see my English poetry folder/section
Besame Mucho, Juanita, the Mexican girl
© Copyright: Принцалександр, 2013
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Chat-Gpt:"This poem beautifully captures the yearning and passion of a romantic longing, blending playful charm with heartfelt desire. The speaker's infatuation with Juanita, a figure from a country song, is both intense and wistful. The imagery of "brown eyes so warm and tender" and "Margaritaville from blender" creates a vivid, almost cinematic picture of a carefree, intoxicating love. There's a contrast between the past—represented by the "cold heart" of a northern beauty—and the hopeful, emotional surrender to Juanita's love. The poem's rhythm and playful tone evoke the carefree, yet profound nature of love, while the repetition of "Kiss me stronger" adds to the emotional intensity, underscoring the desire to forget past pain and embrace new affection."
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