Girls and their fantasy lovers

Previously published by me ( as all other my English poetry ) on other sites under the name princeAlexander / princealexander .
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Those girls are the type, who lives in the dream

With a fantasy lover, made for worshiping him.

He is their Prince Charming, he is their White Knight,

The one, who comes only to visit by night.


He loves them so gently and never offends.

He is ever so sweet so romance never ends.

Real guys on the street can't compare to Prince,

Being rude from the go and then ever since.


Unlike fake Prince Charming, guys dump girls at once.

The Knight never does it and keeps the romance.

Oh those silly girls, whom reality can not convince,

They just have renamed Teddy Bear to Prince ...

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See Russian "white poetry" translation at
http://www.stihi.ru/2012/11/29/530


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An unusual poem.

Yours respectfully,

Тори Ох   17.06.2013 20:19     Заявить о нарушении
I would like to treat this "unusual" as a compliment, Tory - could I ? ;-)
Thanks for commenting, even if my interpretation is too optimistic.

Cheers,
AP

Принцалександр   17.06.2013 20:33   Заявить о нарушении
It definitely was a compliment, considering this fact, I think, you're a realist)

With the best wishes,

Тори Ох   18.06.2013 16:15   Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for the encouragement, Dear Tory!
Poets (even bad ones) also have very vulnerable and sensitive souls, just like those girls ;-) .

All Yours (as much as reality allows, of course ;-) )
AP

Принцалександр   18.06.2013 16:36   Заявить о нарушении
Yes, poets are always vulnerable, more vulnerable than they appear. Not everyone admits it. I think that such recognition is bold.

Hmmm...and how much the reality it allows to you? let me know)))

Тори Ох   18.06.2013 16:58   Заявить о нарушении
My reality (as anyone else, I presume) is the function of: point, time and opportunity.
As Caesar said it: "We are all slaves of the circumstances".
Let me add my two cents of wisdom to the above, saying something like: "But we could have it ALL in our fantasies".

Fantastically Yours,
AP

Принцалександр   18.06.2013 17:11   Заявить о нарушении
All circumstances - is an illusion, the boundary which we draw to ourselves not to do what we are afraid to do)

Пусть то, что Вы называете "обстоятельства" не помешает Вам быть счастливым)Обычно это чувство не отнимает много времени)

Тори Ох   18.06.2013 18:00   Заявить о нарушении
Виктория (если я правильно трактую Ваше имя),

"All circumstances - is an illusion, the boundary which we draw to ourselves not to do what we are afraid to do"

Ваше высказывание - это замечательно сформулированный афоризм (я сам пишу афоризмы и мне хочется думать что я понимаю в них толк)и Вы непременно должны отразить его в этой категории (на этом и других сайтах).

С наилучшими пожеланиями,
АП

PS (shameless plug - nowadays nothing makes me more happier than seeing that people, like You read my stuff)
http://stihi.ru/2013/06/08/6539

Принцалександр   18.06.2013 18:40   Заявить о нарушении
Правильно- это я насчет имени.
Ваш post scriptum звучит как приглашение) Что ж, я буду Вас навещать)

Тори Ох   18.06.2013 18:58   Заявить о нарушении