Will my death justify my actions?
Will my life be enough to excuse?
Will it heal all pain and distraction
That I brought to loved ones I’m about to lose?
I will silently kill my howl,
I can take rigorous pain.
I will pay for mistakes with my soul
With the last ray of the sun and a rain.
Please, forgive me for empty decisions,
Please, forgive me for silence and all
What I have done to you and your vision
And will ever do to your soul.
Maybe, I should have gone and just left you,
Maybe, I should have built a glass wall,
As I always did to contribute
To everyone and still not to fall…
There is no possible way to resolve this
Without tearing one’s heart apart.
So I’m asking, would death excuse me
For cowardice and weakness of heart?
The Dead End
© Copyright: Алина Кан, 2013
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Can you write something more or less positive please???? At least once.... I have been waiting for something shiny all this time... I know it was quite short period, but were not you happy then?
It is not a dead lock. its just a new trial you got on your way. Please dont harm yourself.
Every time I see a new poem on you page it makes me sad...
The poem is perfect as it is. But I dont want to see you ONLY in that state of soul.
Ашироги Муто 21.05.2013 23:28 • Заявить о нарушении
It is not a dead lock. its just a new trial you got on your way. Please dont harm yourself.
Every time I see a new poem on you page it makes me sad...
The poem is perfect as it is. But I dont want to see you ONLY in that state of soul.
Ашироги Муто 21.05.2013 23:28 • Заявить о нарушении
It's not the only state. You know that. And you know why I wrote it yesterday. I'm still happy though. Pain is good, it makes you feel alive. I Am happy despite this temporary pain.
=)
Алина Кан 22.05.2013 00:26 Заявить о нарушении
=)
Алина Кан 22.05.2013 00:26 Заявить о нарушении
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