I think too often

I'm sitting in the dark
And thinking i was wrong.
You'll eat my open heart.
I never will be strong.
This world is more then art,
This words sound very well.
That heart is like a drum,
That mind is like a bell.


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Not bad!:)I think, you have a talante, if you write a poems like this, in english. Are you have more poems in english?

Тата Мистофелис   11.07.2013 12:01     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks! :) I don't think so, 'cause I'm not too good at speaking that language. And no, I don't, it's the only english poem.

Эйлин Монстерсон   11.07.2013 19:17   Заявить о нарушении
You could try to write more, don't underestimate yourself! Good luck!

Тата Мистофелис   11.07.2013 19:32   Заявить о нарушении
kay kay, maybe later. )

Эйлин Монстерсон   11.07.2013 23:14   Заявить о нарушении