In the ocean

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In the ocean.


Ocean admired stars. Stars are  admiring the ocean. It was autumn ,  the best time of year in these latitudes. The sun is not beating down but  warms. Warm waves are calm. At night, the ocean gives back the warm to the  dark blue air  and swings reflection of the stars. It lies peacefully as big, dangerous, slumbering beast. Moonlit path went to the horizon.
This October night was special. Lifebuoy slept  and saw the  happy dreams. He dreamed that he is back on a board the schooner, called "Fortune." That small, beautiful ship long ago was  his home . He has always been attached to the board, and the captain of his own hands each year painted it in red and white. Captain wrote, with the beautiful  twiddles, on the Lifebuoy the word *Fortune*  and fixed around strong ropes with sturdy canvas belts  . Lifebuoy is  smiling in his sleep because he saw the dream of happiness.
But happiness  can’t be  long . One day the storm crushed  the schooner and it  sank with the crew. Only one  Lifebuoy saved himself and many years sailed alone in the ocean. Blue letters erased, leaving only the one, the most beautiful letter,  F.  It has three  twiddles , it was a decoration of  Lifebuoy, and reminded him of his happy days on the  board of schooner . But the bright, red and white sides still glistened on the sun, the captain never skimp on the paint. He loved his schooner, and everything in  it. But all this  were in the past. A Lifebuoy was  alone  for many  years,  and swings  on the waves of ocean. He survived several storms, which gave him a sprig of red coral and beautiful, pink seashell. Lifebuoy firmly secured them on the rope and admired them, They were his only riches.
At first Lifebuoy greatly suffered from loneliness, but gradually he got used. Time, if not cure, it dulls the pain of loss.
It happened on October 16, at the night when Lifebuoy saw his happy dream. He thought that crying is a part of the dream, but the dream was nice and there was no place for shouting. Then he realized that it was a cry from the reality and woke up. «Help ... help ... help». And Lifebuoy rushed to help, after all, it was just that for he was intended. He swam to  Sinking, and he swam  to Lifebuoy too then he lay with his weary body on Lifebuoy  and instantly fell asleep. Sinking slept long, almost two days. All this time Lifebuoy regarded him. Sinking was a young sailor. He had a white skin, blond hair on his hands, wavy reddish-brown hair on his head, thin and beautiful fingers, almost childish, youthful face.
When Sinking woke up , it happened at night, he drank the fresh water that has accumulated in the  pink seashell  after the rain and told  Lifebuoy about himself .
Sinking was mixed . He has  French and Arabic (Syrian) blood. But he spoke in English because Lifebuoy  understood this  language. Sinking was handsome . He has  flexible, proportional, young body and nice face with big brown eyes and childish, fresh lips. When he smiled,  were visible his nice teeth . Two blood mixed, gave excellent result.
He found work as a seaman on a large ship, but there was  a mutiny on the ship. And all the supporters of the captain was hanged from the yardarm. He miraculously survived. He jumped from the ship into the water and swam a long time, he could not say how much time , because he lost  the sense of reality . He was happy that, finally,  Fortune smiled him  and now he does not have to swim, and could lay  on the Lifebuoy  and have a  rest.
Lifebuoy began a new life. He cared about  Sinking. He taught him how to use the filum from  the rope  and  the  earring taken from his ear for  fishing , how to accumulate  fresh rain water in the  large pink seashell . And Sinking  was  learning  everything very quick  , he was smart and adroit. Now he does not need food and water. They were almost happy together, Sinking and  Lifebuoy. Sinking lay  on Lifebuoy and caressed  him  and whispered to him words of gratitude. He called him affectionate nicknames. Lifebuoy  was in seventh heaven. He felt, Sinking  need him and he was immensely happy
So together they sailed for days and months. They used to each other and they were like the whole one.  Once upon a time winds formed  in Lifebuoy  empty cavity, then Soul settled there. And now this Soul is fully owned by Sinking. Lifebuoy had just  the coral twig  , pink seashell  and Soul. It was the whole his riches  . And  he didn’t hesitate gave  Sinking all he had .  Sinking, it seemed, was happy too, but sometimes, when he looked at the moon tears appeared   in his eyes. He missed home. Lifebuoy pitied him , wiping  his tears with ropes and they again sailed on. 
But, as already stated, the happiness doesn’t last long. Sinking once saw a small dot in the distance, near the horizon, and they are with Lifebuoy swam  to it they wanted to understand what is it . They reached the goal at sunset  and saw a beautiful  boat. The new, with white boards. It was pink by the last rays of the sun. On the sides of the boat was painted blue stripe. It was empty and is swinging  on the waves. Swam, Sinking moved in the boat and tied   Lifebuoy with the rope  to  aft. Then he saw the contents of the boat. In the boat were oars, a large piece of canvas and a considerable supply of drinking water in bottles and  packs with biscuits  and dried fruit inside . Happy smile didn’t leave Sinking’s face . He sat on the bottom of the boat and examined packs  with strange inscriptions in an unknown language. Lifebuoy  silently watching him. Sinking forgot about his friend. He studied the map, which he  found under the big canvas . On map was painted a starry sky, and under it  was  written the explanation how to use the stars for  choosing  the right direction.
The next day Sinking built  the sail of canvas and sailed on . There was a fair wind and the boat was moving quickly through the waves. Attached Lifebuoy  sailed behind the boat. Sinking after he moved in the boat  stopped to talk with Lifebuoy. He spoke only with the boat. He whispered  sweet words and  gentle nicknames, and the boat creaked back subtly.
The Lifebuoy does not imagine a life without Sinking, and sometimes he tried to talk to Sinking , but the sailor replied indifferently, and Lifebuoy was very unhappy. Sinking didn’t need him any more. He was no longer needed.
And in those moments when Sinking  was whispering  with the boat, Lifebuoy struggled to untie the rope to swim away and not hear more of these words. But the rope was securely attached. And after several weeks of suffering ( because  Lifebuoy had a Soul), after all he asked Sinking to let him sail away . But the sailor said that he  is  dear  and he does not want to Lifebuoy  sailed alone in the ocean. And a few more weeks Life buoy listened to the  tortured him whisper in the night.
When  Lifebuoy  began to reproach Sinking in hard-heartedness, the sailor said that the Lifebuoy  is just his  past, but  the boat is his future, and he must look to the future. Lifebuoy offended and told  many harsh words , he said  an ocean full of the Sinkings , and he will save  someone again. And he's not simple lifebuoy but he  has a Soul inside , and he was hurt by the fact Sinking had betrayed him. They have long argued and everything ended when  sailor untied Lifebuoy  and left him alone in the ocean. And Lifebuoy saw  how the boat is sailing  away  , long ... long ... till the boat  turned  into a point and has disappeared.
Lifebuoy  knew that  Sinkings are very rare in the ocean, and maybe he is doomed to loneliness to  the end of his life and he didn't want to dream someone will sink  ... and  feel  very sad. He was  swinging  on the waves ... and the only colored fish swam around him,  they were sympathetic him  and sometimes touching him  with his delicate fins.