May I write to you this letter?
May I tell you all my dreams?
May this lines will be a pleasure
For your mind and for your lips.
In a cold and winter evening
I'm missing your quiet voice.
In a dark night I can't sleep and
Do I have a blear choice?
You left me in empty house,
Candles burned without you,
I have only lonely shadows,
Living in my mind and rooms.
When I had success and money,
You were every day with me.
But when I had lost it, honey,
You instantly have left me.
I'm writing you a letter,
I was telling all my dreams,
And I hope you're reading it and
I forgive you. Good bye, miss!
Good bye, miss!
© Copyright: Филимонова Екатерина, 2012
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Стих на английском так не строится. Там свои слоги и правила.
Евгений Буданцев 17.01.2013 04:40 • Заявить о нарушении
Евгений Буданцев 17.01.2013 04:40 • Заявить о нарушении
May I write to you this letter?
May I tell you all my dreams?
May these lines will be a pleasure
For your mind and for your lips.
In a cold of winter evening
I'm missing your quiet voice.
In the night of you I am dreaming
Do I have a blear choice?
You left me in empty house,
Candles burned without you,
I have only lonely shadows,
Living in my mind and rooms.
When I had success and money,
You were every day with me.
But when I had lost it, honey,
You have left, mon ami
I'm writing you a letter,
I am telling you my dreams,
And in short, here's what it means:
"I forgive you. Good bye, Miss!
Принцалександр 03.08.2013 22:00 Заявить о нарушении
May I tell you all my dreams?
May these lines will be a pleasure
For your mind and for your lips.
In a cold of winter evening
I'm missing your quiet voice.
In the night of you I am dreaming
Do I have a blear choice?
You left me in empty house,
Candles burned without you,
I have only lonely shadows,
Living in my mind and rooms.
When I had success and money,
You were every day with me.
But when I had lost it, honey,
You have left, mon ami
I'm writing you a letter,
I am telling you my dreams,
And in short, here's what it means:
"I forgive you. Good bye, Miss!
Принцалександр 03.08.2013 22:00 Заявить о нарушении