No simile runs on all fours
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No simile runs on all fours,
but somehow we managed to do this.
It’s your and it’s my paradOx,
the synonym turns antithesis.
“Could ever together we be”?
‘OxYmoron, dear’ – the answer,
Rhetorical question, you see…
A cripple cannot be a dancer.
Relationship turns into pun,
asYndeton rises between us,
my feelings have brought me no fun,
and you’re my untreatable illness.
No simile runs on all fours,
how could I just call you ‘my dear’?..
Gradation of feelings just pours
Inversion of you being near.
No simile runs on all fours
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Very nice. Looks like that author higly skilled in english grammatic.
But, what am i talking about... Shure she is! Every person, who graduates FL faculty, can speak on english without any barriers, yes?
P. S. Forgive me for my mistakes, that i wrote higher. Correct me, if it possible :) . My english not so good, as your's ;) . But i'm trying.
Алексей Федорович Чернов 08.05.2013 17:00 • Заявить о нарушении
But, what am i talking about... Shure she is! Every person, who graduates FL faculty, can speak on english without any barriers, yes?
P. S. Forgive me for my mistakes, that i wrote higher. Correct me, if it possible :) . My english not so good, as your's ;) . But i'm trying.
Алексей Федорович Чернов 08.05.2013 17:00 • Заявить о нарушении
Almost no mistakes.)) :P Ideal variant:
"Very nice. Looks like the author is very skilled in english grammar. Sure she is! Can speak english))"
Your English is veeery good, really :) You should improve it.
And thank you for these warm words. :)
Екатерина Овсяник 04.06.2013 19:58 Заявить о нарушении
"Very nice. Looks like the author is very skilled in english grammar. Sure she is! Can speak english))"
Your English is veeery good, really :) You should improve it.
And thank you for these warm words. :)
Екатерина Овсяник 04.06.2013 19:58 Заявить о нарушении
Wow, only 2 mistakes! I feel myself very satisfied.
TY :) .
Алексей Федорович Чернов 05.06.2013 11:19 Заявить о нарушении
TY :) .
Алексей Федорович Чернов 05.06.2013 11:19 Заявить о нарушении