Бейя Клара Вентура. Колумбия. Экран

````````````````````````````````````Bella Clara Ventura
`````````````````````````(del libro “Paz, sicaria de la lagrima”)


`````````````````````````````````````````PANTALLA

``````````````````````````````````````De mesura corta
 `````````````````````````````````````````la paz
````````````````````````````````cuando sin alma se escucha.
`````````````````````````````De larga al aprehender su halito
``````````````````````````````````en el latir del hombre.
````````````````````````````````Las balas no la amedrentan
`````````````````````````````````````y menos las bombas
``````````````````````````````````de corto o largo alcance.
`````````````````````````````````Saca mensajes de sus plumas
`````````````````````````````````para escribir otra historia
````````````````````````````````````en el purpura derramado.
```````````````````````````````````````````Del pecho
``````````````````````````````````le vuelan aves de rapina
``````````````````````````````````con picos goteando rojos.
````````````````````````````````````En el ultimo aliento
``````````````````````````````````````````se dispone
``````````````````````````````````a pedir otra oportunidad
``````````````````````````````````para recomponer el sentido
`````````````````````````````````````````sin distancias
 ```````````````````````````````````````````ni idiomas
`````````````````````````````````que le arrebaten virulencia
````````````````````````````````````en soledad de p;lvoras.
`````````````````````````````````````Su nombre tan sonoro
  ```````````````````````````````````````como propio:
 `````````````````````````````````````````````PAZ,
```````````````````````````````````Pacecita para los ;ntimos,
`````````````````````````````````````amigos de su nobleza.
```````````````````````````````Deja en claridades otros focos.
```````````````````````````````````Renacidos de su entrana
 ````````````````````````````````````````cuando la vida
``````````````````````````````````````se pinta de blanco.
```````````````````````````````````````````Y el negro
````````````````````````````le queda a la pantalla de la guerra
````````````````````````````````para escribir la palabra: FIN.
```````````````````````````````````Pel;cula con final feliz,
```````````````````````````````````aclamada por espectadores
````````````````````````````````````en humanismo descritos.

````````````````````````````````По мотивам Бейи Клары Вентуры.
`````````````````````````````````````````````ЭКРАН
````````````````(Свидетельство о публикации распространяется только на перевод)
``````````````````Литературный перевод с испанского О. Шаховской (Пономаревой)


````````````````````````````````Для мира существует ли предел
```````````````````````````````в конфликтах войнах и смертях?!
```````````````````````````````````Меня обязан слушать тот,
``````````````````````````````````кто в алчности своей увяз
`````````````````````````````````````````и преуспел.
`````````````````````````Пора начать воспринимать… и атмосферу изучать,
````````````````````````````````состав её наводит ужас, страх,
```````````````````````````````и пульс сердечный вверх «качает»,
```````````````````````````````````привычно «свечки» отмечая.
````````````````````````````````Ни пули, ни снаряды и ни бомбы
`````````````````````````````````````хорошего не предвещают.
````````````````````````````````````````Ведь это аксиома!
``````````````````````Скорей ведут в Аид, чем к благоденствию, успеху.
`````````````````````````Могильщики мы с вами сами, ловкими руками…
``````````````````````````для человечества творим трагическую веху
`````````````````````````````````````````историю иную
`````````````````````````````где щедрость пурпура настрой диктует…
``````````````````````````````А грудь расклёвывает птица хищная,
``````````````````````````````чей клюв терзающий обрызган кровью.
```````````````````````````````````Ты из последних сил проси,
````````````````````чтоб чувства всех людей без расстояний, языков, сословий
``````````````````````````````````````наполнились любовью,
````````````````````````````````чтоб недоверие сломить и колкость,
````````````````````````````````они, как порох, одиночество палят.
```````````````````````````````````Как благозвучно слово «МИР»
`````````````````````````````````в широтах дома с именем Земля!
````````````````````````````````Сказала, и в душе покоя аромат,
````````````````````````````````````как будто чище стал эфир.
```````````````````````````Приветствую друзей достойных, благородных,
``````````````````````````````````возможность для иных эмоций,
````````````````````````````````мыслей от борьбы, стыда свободных.
````````````````````````````````Душа отравленная – пьяный лоцман –
`````````````````````````````````cвет белый превращает в чёрный,
`````````````````````````````````рождая бой неистовый, позорный.
````````````````````````````````Давно бы на экран послать «финал»…
``````````````````````````````````Как мир от войн страдать устал!
`````````````````````````````````Картину со счастливым окончанием
`````````````````````````````````````советуют нам Небо, жизнь,
```````````````````````````````````чтоб зрителей овации звучали,
``````````````````````````````````торжествовал на свете гуманизм!


05.08.12
 


Рецензии
"Меня обязан слушать тот,
````кто в алчности своей увяз
````и преуспел".

Этот посыл в начале стиха ошибочен. Никто из названных не обязан слушать
ни автора, ни переводчика. У него другая задача, ему это не надо -
кого-то слушать. Он моральный урод, создающий шулерские правила игры.
И далее рассуждения сводятся к пресловутой схоластике. Декларативность читателя может и утомить. Сигнал, "финал", усталость мира - и в реале,
и на бумаге.
Извиняюсь, Оля, но в этом стихотворении я почувствовал перехлёст.
С уважением к труду переводчика - Владимир

Владимир Петрович Трофимов   25.07.2013 01:55     Заявить о нарушении
Да, есть момент, автор обращается "к слепым",
призывая их увидеть плоды...
Спасибо за вдумчивое прочтение.
Удачи, Володя!
Ольга

Ольга Шаховская   28.07.2013 00:47   Заявить о нарушении