existence

bleeding clouds on the gauze sky,
so tremendously torture my sanity,
forcing to open my eyes,
facing awakening of the rot of humanity..
my empty veins and ripped off heart..
of grim plex words - symbol of profanity ..
and how to carry on existence..
release my soul to farewell fly,
amplitudes of see-through wings
to sweep my inflamed mind..
solitude.. without any ..single body to understand..my life.
..........................................................
sanguinamento nuvole sul cielo di garza,
 cosi tremendamente tortura la mia sanitа mentale,
 costringendo ad aprire gli occhi,
 di fronte risveglio il marciume dell'umanitа ..
 le mie vene vuote e strappato via il cuore ..
 di parole complesse triste - simbolo di profanitа ..
 e come portare avanti l'esistenza ..
 liberare la mia anima a volo d'addio,
 ampiezze delle ali trasparenti
 a spazzare la mia mente infiammato ..
 la solitudine .. senza che nessuno singolo per capire .. la mia vita


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Your body empty (out of blood).
But soul worth something in his mind.
He comes for changing :
Soul to life!

Уръия   12.03.2012 23:04     Заявить о нарушении
lets hope for better this time. :))

Алрови   13.03.2012 05:12   Заявить о нарушении
Time...
Mood...
Life...
Blood...
& ... breath
and now -
your time...

(I wait ..
...

Уръия   11.06.2012 03:48   Заявить о нарушении
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