There s no future for us

There's no future for us.
It's a shame, blame me now.
There's no way I will trust.
If I will, tell me how?

You were lying to me
And I suffered so much.
There's no way to breathe free:
My heart bleeds 'cos it's scrutched.

It's my second.
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Рецензии
In the cause of lies
How hard to breathe,
Feelings never die
Trust or just believe.
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Soul verses,with some kind unsaid hope...Enjoyed,

Андрей Фишт   19.10.2011 23:39     Заявить о нарушении
There's so many unsaid in this poem: love, tears and hope, as you've noticed. Thank you, Andrey, for reading and writing reviews for my poetry.

Best wish,

Анастасия Чижова   20.10.2011 16:35   Заявить о нарушении