The dawn is pale,
The day is done and glowing on my lids,
I hit the jail -
Emotions fade as being in exceed.
I've lost it all and on my knees
I watch like purple oceans bleed.
Eternal race
Blurs all good moments of my wasted life,
Letdown lays
A shade on memories I drink and dive.
I could exist in blue exile,
But time disturbs and tears me wild.
And now I need a rest.
Maybe I will gently smile
To ray of light or something less..
But only in another life.
In the other life para C-lekktor
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To sum up everything that I have read
I wish I could write better, it's my bad
My english is so poor It makes me sad
It's kinda late, I better go to bed
=)))))))))))
You're the best
I'm being serious
Олег Артынов 27.04.2012 00:36 • Заявить о нарушении
I wish I could write better, it's my bad
My english is so poor It makes me sad
It's kinda late, I better go to bed
=)))))))))))
You're the best
I'm being serious
Олег Артынов 27.04.2012 00:36 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you kindly :D I apreciate it really.
And as for the language - it always can be improved, so don't feel sad so much, better listen to the songs, it helps a lot ;)
Ольга Бестужева 10.05.2012 23:56 Заявить о нарушении
And as for the language - it always can be improved, so don't feel sad so much, better listen to the songs, it helps a lot ;)
Ольга Бестужева 10.05.2012 23:56 Заявить о нарушении