On-life-5

Буду благодарен конструктивным замечаниям людей,
владеющих поэтическим английским,
по устранению шероховатостей и ошибок.
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Hey, Mankind, you have little chance to survive 
In order to feel real, powerful drive
We must ride together the front line of life,
Or shorter and brighter: Together ON-LIFE !

The nature is too rich to meet our needs,
But poor to sate limitless  human weeds.
The planet is shocked with all our misdeeds;
Don't suck out your motherland's tits.

If we are aggressive and foolish in greed
The nature may answer: “this isn't agreed “
The planet may drop us, may drop us, indeed;
And only one way we have to succeed:

To save nature's flight of the falling in dive
Let's deal with the planet, as if it`s a fife
Let`s say our planet "hey, Planet, take five!"
The Mankind and Planet, Together: ON-LIFE !

Be SAPIENS, HOMO, or else not be.
I think universe  wants us happy and free.
It wants our “oops!” to a lesser degree.
Be SAPIENS , HOMO, be SAPIENS, BE...


Let's stop any kind of the meaningless strife
Let's break domination of bullet and knife
Let's say everybody each other “take five!”.
The Mankind and Planet, Together: ON-LIFE !