All my life I just run, I just pray.
And you know I just follow my way.
Everything what I see is just rain.
I just ask – no more tears, no more pain.
My heart beats and it really cries.
I’m so tired and I close my eyes.
Everything what I feel is just frost.
And I'm looking for what I have lost!
Empty dreams, empty sorrows and grief.
I can fly but I don’t feel relief.
I don’t want any evil and lie.
I believe I can conquer the sky.
All this world can be sold, can be bought.
You’re my love, everything what I’ve got.
We’re apart, all my feelings are tossed.
And I'm looking for what I have lost.
Lost
© Copyright: Татьяна Пивоварофф, 2011
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To say you the truth, I hate English as a language and I don’t like its poetry. But I must confess that your song is very nice… The rhythm and the rhymes are perfect and clever. No doubt you’re very talented!
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 14:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 14:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you ))) It's very kind of you to say such warm words about my poetry. I'm a teacher of English and I adore this language so much!!! I sent this poem to my Australian friend. And he said it's rather good )))
Татьяна Пивоварофф 28.12.2011 15:07 Заявить о нарушении
Татьяна Пивоварофф 28.12.2011 15:07 Заявить о нарушении
Sorry… I didn’t want to humiliate your interests and profession. I respect teachers for their difficult job. And your Australian friend was right! For example, I can’t write such a wonderful song in English =)
Unfortunately, I have some kind of distaste for English culture… I think it’s the guiltiness of my teachers because their lessons were very boring… That’s why I prefer Spanish as a way of communication.
Excuse me if I’ve made some mistakes in my message =)
I promise I’ll change my attitude! =)
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 15:36 Заявить о нарушении
Unfortunately, I have some kind of distaste for English culture… I think it’s the guiltiness of my teachers because their lessons were very boring… That’s why I prefer Spanish as a way of communication.
Excuse me if I’ve made some mistakes in my message =)
I promise I’ll change my attitude! =)
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 15:36 Заявить о нарушении
You needn't change your attitude! You have the right to like or to dislike English or English culture in a whole. My second language is German but I don't like it. Besides I would like to learn Italian some day. Spanish is alright either but Italian for me is more pleasant and more expressive.
Татьяна Пивоварофф 28.12.2011 16:04 Заявить о нарушении
Татьяна Пивоварофф 28.12.2011 16:04 Заявить о нарушении
Italian is a good choice… I can understand Italian but I can’t speak it. This language is very similar to Spanish but the last one is simpler for learning.
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 16:19 Заявить о нарушении
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 16:19 Заявить о нарушении
I wish I could find time for learning both Italian and Spanish. Also Japanese attracts me much. But now it's impossible. No time...
Татьяна Пивоварофф 28.12.2011 16:29 Заявить о нарушении
Татьяна Пивоварофф 28.12.2011 16:29 Заявить о нарушении
Ok. I’ll help you with Spanish if you start to learn it =)
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 16:39 Заявить о нарушении
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 16:39 Заявить о нарушении
Just give me a sign when you’d like to start. Now I should leave the site. Have a nice day!
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 16:52 Заявить о нарушении
Вадим Де Макондо 28.12.2011 16:52 Заявить о нарушении