The Planet ON-LiFE-2

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последняя версия здесь: http://www.stihi.ru/2011/10/11/3997
Буду благодарен конструктивным замечаниям людей,
владеющих поэтическим английским... по устранению шероховатостей и ощибок...

The mankind, you have little chance to survive 
In order to feel real, powerful drive
You ought to be on the front line of Life
Or shorter and stronger, and brighter – ON-LIFE   
 
We must deal with planet as if it’s a fife
Let's greet our Planet: “hay, Planet, take five” 
Invite here, invite to the dance of the Life
The PLANET  ON-LIFE, The PLANET  ON-LIFE

The nature is too rich to meet our needs
But poor to sate us as humanly weeds
Reality blends of all our misdeeds
Don't  suck  out your motherland tits 

We must deal with planet as if it’s a fife
Let's greet  ower Planet: “hay, Planet, take five” 
Invite here, invite to the dance of the Life
The PLANET  ON-LIFE, The PLANET  ON-LIFE

If we will be foolish and stupidly greed
The nature may say: “ it isn't agreed “
The planet may drop us, may drop us, indeed
And we have an only way to succeed

We must deal with planet as if it’s a fife
Let's greet our planet: “hay, planet, take five” 
Invite her, invite to the dance of the Life
The PLANET  ON-LIFE, The PLANET  ON-LIFE

Be SAPIENSE, HOMO, or else not be
We all sons off hall universe referee
He wants our “oops”  to a lesser degree
Be SAPIENS , HOMO, be SAPIENS, BE...
      
Let's stop any kind of the meaningless strife
Let's brake domination of bullet and knife
Let's say everybody each other “take five”
The PLANET  ON-LIFE, The PLANET  ON-LIFE …