Вот и окончились встречи.
В нашей душе непогода.
Бьётся сердце, где-то больно.
В голове, в висках долго.
Провожать больше некого.
Больше некого нам любить.
В чём грешна, что я сделала.
За любовь расставаньем казнить!
Нет вины, что в душе непогода!
Видно брошены мы судьбой!
И горят наши души заживо.
Каждой клеткой чувствуют боль.
Всё внутри рассыпается россыпью.
Миллионами зыбких дождей.
Мы остались с тобою, брошены.
Я ничья, да и ты ничей.
20.08.2011.
Вот и окончились встречи
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