Loneliness I Feel

I used to think there were no devils,
I used to think there were no gods.
Some people tried to persuade me
But nothing could destroy my thoughts.

I always had my own opinion,
And never listened to advice.
I knew that one day I’d be sorry,
And now I have to pay the price.


My loneliness is killing me,
I hate this pain so deep inside.
This hell’s around me endlessly.
I simply wish I died...


I’m crying but nobody hears,
And I’m afraid I’ll stay alone.
The rain’ll absorb my heavy tears,
And I’ll become a lifeless stone.

My heart will break. A lake of blood
Will flow to the bitter ocean.
I’ll pass away but I’ll be glad:
I won’t be able to feel emotions...

2009


Рецензии
So painful, so strong in the beginning and so good. The beauty of feelings in each word.

Алёна Собокарь   27.08.2011 18:17     Заявить о нарушении
this is just what i felt.
have you decided to read all my poems?)))

Твой Пепел   27.08.2011 18:47   Заявить о нарушении
does this one remind you a song?

Твой Пепел   27.08.2011 18:48   Заявить о нарушении
I'm just interested in you, so I can't help reading you ;)
Yes, it does. Did it planned to be a song?

Алёна Собокарь   27.08.2011 19:00   Заявить о нарушении
oh))) it's pleasant to hear))
yes, it was. maybe one day my friends will use it as lyrics.

Твой Пепел   27.08.2011 19:03   Заявить о нарушении
Oh, it would be interesting to hear it))

Алёна Собокарь   27.08.2011 19:05   Заявить о нарушении
maybe, some day...)

Твой Пепел   27.08.2011 19:07   Заявить о нарушении