In daytime, in moonlight...

In daytime, in moonlight,
Very close and out of sight,
In happiness, in sadness,
In joy and in madness,
In hotness, in coldness,
In fullness and voidness,
Alone and together,
In rain, in hot weather,
In tears and with pleasure,
In poor and with treasure,
In future, in past,
Being first, being last,
Before and after,
With anger, with laughter,
Babbling and speechless,
Being rich, being cheapness,
On a bright side and a dark one,
I know there is special someone,
And this special person is you,
Like you in the world just only a few,
I was happy to meet my one of a kind,
The one who was able to change my own mind,
I want to share with you all of the above
And tell you everyday about my sweet love.


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Nice! It's true, it's real, it's powerful and the feeling is there... Still a bit raw in some places but deserves the attention. Through this poem you've managed to tell about your feelings, succeeded I should say. Good work! Thank you for publishing this.


Элиза Микаилова   03.09.2011 05:51     Заявить о нарушении
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