She promised me one time eternal love,
But lied,
She's the one, I dream in color of
At night,
And no matter how sick I feel
Inside
I'm deeply madly still in crazy love
Despite
And nothing ever changes
Just craving widley ranges
From tender love to rages
From gloomy darks to sunny blue and
bright...
January 2011
New-York
The curse
© Copyright: Гарик Зилберт, 2011
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Whait,I wont to show you,like to expert, my translation by Google Translator.
My own poems in eng.!
Андрей Российский 27.04.2011 22:54 • Заявить о нарушении
My own poems in eng.!
Андрей Российский 27.04.2011 22:54 • Заявить о нарушении
Я вряд ли действительно эксперт))) но почитаю с удовольствием, давайте )))
Гарик Зилберт 27.04.2011 23:27 Заявить о нарушении
Гарик Зилберт 27.04.2011 23:27 Заявить о нарушении
Опубликовал 20.Жду новый день.Настанет через 30 минут.Опубликую 20.И вам пришлю сегодня.Обязательно.
Андрей Российский 27.04.2011 23:32 Заявить о нарушении
Андрей Российский 27.04.2011 23:32 Заявить о нарушении
Practitioner of black magic
Candles in the darkness and the thunder peals
By heaven cries the old man hairy.
White, like the century, the evil everlasting.
Angry, like a river, a whirlpool of a river.
Vengeance calls on heads of enemies,
Death wishes, squalid magician.
Fierce, blinded, captivated by hate,
Masterful magician, destroying a groan.
Gaze into a frenzy - anger his shadow,
Hate in diligence - gloomy day.
Leaking by rife snake thought,
Will wash in blood - revenge his life.
"Dark Ages and the ash plains,
Spirits of the forests from oldest gray hairs,
Power defiant, all-night sun,
Give me the strength to throw a single!
Moon by blood, deep sorrow,
Star of the worlds, the high grove,
Roar of mountains begging you, I,
To instill in my growl the greatest horror!
Hot flame, wide steppe,
Mother Earth, Himalayan creature,
Green envy, burning hate ,
Send me a seething fury from the sky!
Lightning light, the river bottomless
Cries imploring, fetid swamps,
Screaming of sirens, venom of snake ,
Set to me, droved out , your fate! "
Deal
Come, O almighty ruler of the night,
You ready to offer my soul,
I no longer tolerate the pain again
And my head is ready to lay down!
Legends of you are growing from soot.
Bonfires are lit and the smoke of your moaning.
And in a flame of fire in the blood to the elbow,
Hear me, I conjure the word!
I saw blood on the paper rhyme
And the word seems to me to die together
That the sky turned black, the pain subsided
And tears of joy turned into revenge.
Take my soul and burn by iron
Where will disappeared and the pain has changed,
Where my heart is in her heart began to beat
And it was a groan from the burnt closely!
I juice you pull out and the darkness began to sob.
And the juice would kill the arteries rod.
Let the pain at dawn in me grows,
Let the pain in her heart becomes less!
And soon I will explode, overflow vessels
In that love overrides outflows.
One by one will scatter syllables,
Will stick to her all my foolhardy.
Now I am ready, take the agreement.
It is all the more, I beg ...
Take my soul, give my secret.
I hate death, but I believe the convergence
Андрей Российский 28.04.2011 00:06 Заявить о нарушении
Candles in the darkness and the thunder peals
By heaven cries the old man hairy.
White, like the century, the evil everlasting.
Angry, like a river, a whirlpool of a river.
Vengeance calls on heads of enemies,
Death wishes, squalid magician.
Fierce, blinded, captivated by hate,
Masterful magician, destroying a groan.
Gaze into a frenzy - anger his shadow,
Hate in diligence - gloomy day.
Leaking by rife snake thought,
Will wash in blood - revenge his life.
"Dark Ages and the ash plains,
Spirits of the forests from oldest gray hairs,
Power defiant, all-night sun,
Give me the strength to throw a single!
Moon by blood, deep sorrow,
Star of the worlds, the high grove,
Roar of mountains begging you, I,
To instill in my growl the greatest horror!
Hot flame, wide steppe,
Mother Earth, Himalayan creature,
Green envy, burning hate ,
Send me a seething fury from the sky!
Lightning light, the river bottomless
Cries imploring, fetid swamps,
Screaming of sirens, venom of snake ,
Set to me, droved out , your fate! "
Deal
Come, O almighty ruler of the night,
You ready to offer my soul,
I no longer tolerate the pain again
And my head is ready to lay down!
Legends of you are growing from soot.
Bonfires are lit and the smoke of your moaning.
And in a flame of fire in the blood to the elbow,
Hear me, I conjure the word!
I saw blood on the paper rhyme
And the word seems to me to die together
That the sky turned black, the pain subsided
And tears of joy turned into revenge.
Take my soul and burn by iron
Where will disappeared and the pain has changed,
Where my heart is in her heart began to beat
And it was a groan from the burnt closely!
I juice you pull out and the darkness began to sob.
And the juice would kill the arteries rod.
Let the pain at dawn in me grows,
Let the pain in her heart becomes less!
And soon I will explode, overflow vessels
In that love overrides outflows.
One by one will scatter syllables,
Will stick to her all my foolhardy.
Now I am ready, take the agreement.
It is all the more, I beg ...
Take my soul, give my secret.
I hate death, but I believe the convergence
Андрей Российский 28.04.2011 00:06 Заявить о нарушении
Хотелось бы взглянуть на русский оригинал, но не нашел на вашей странице((
Гарик Зилберт 28.04.2011 16:26 Заявить о нарушении
Гарик Зилберт 28.04.2011 16:26 Заявить о нарушении
Должна же быть интрига. Время,время...Дня три на комментарии,побольше баллов,рецензий...Плохо-хорошо т.д. и т.п.
Андрей Российский 28.04.2011 16:34 Заявить о нарушении
Андрей Российский 28.04.2011 16:34 Заявить о нарушении
Я действительно не эксперт, увы. Считаю переводы делом архи-сложным и сам за это не берусь ))))могу порекомендовать автора, который по-моему мнению действительно профессионал с большой буквы. Попробуйте показать ей ваш труд, для объективной оценки...http://stihi.ru/avtor/dinab123
От себя добавлю, что самое неважное - это рейтинги )))))
Гарик Зилберт 28.04.2011 21:36 Заявить о нарушении
От себя добавлю, что самое неважное - это рейтинги )))))
Гарик Зилберт 28.04.2011 21:36 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.