The dream

I like the dream I've seen tonight:
A bit old-fashioned black and white.
The plot I felt and chosen theme
Showed me the future in that dream.

A piece of sweets, a bit of jazz,
A pretty girl in snowy gloves,
A conversation – her and me –
And a decision: “Let it be!”

Then was a turn of charming dance,
A splash of love, a hidden chance.
We talked about the empty skies,
About romance, the truth and lies.

I grabbed her all with trembling hands,
With no refuse of clear facts.
And then there was the only kiss.
The only flash. The only bliss.

I woke then up, I was upset –
She was the best I’ve ever met.
But I received from her a light…
I like the dream I saw tonight.


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saw tonight?

Беляева Дина   15.12.2010 20:12     Заявить о нарушении
Уже проконсультировался и исправил, спасибо большое!

Михаил Корчагин   15.12.2010 23:03   Заявить о нарушении
tonight >> last night

Беляева Дина   16.12.2010 01:27   Заявить о нарушении
Not necessarily. As far as English guy explained to me, it is possible to use this structure but with the other tense...

Михаил Корчагин   16.12.2010 05:06   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.