Cherry orchard

In cherry orchard nightingale sings,
Flying up high he’s spreading his wings.
In summer orchard there is a boy.
Talking to girl, he promises joy.

“– Love of life, in beauty you shine.
Leave all your doubts it will be fine.
We’ll be together here and today
Girl, if love me, promise to stay.”

“– Lover, you couldn’t be nicer.
But mother told me you are womanizer.
I don’t believe any your word,
I know your love – it is too short.”

“– I don’t afraid of mother, my sweet.
Why would I lie? Listen to my heartbeat.
Nothing can stop – I will love you.
You will admit your feelings too."

*По мотивам украинской народной песни "Ой, у вишневому саду..."


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A very interesting piece of poetry, I would rather say. There are some touches of a fairy tale. At least, I like it immensely. I wish you success.

Светлана Барашко   01.12.2010 12:16     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you.Writing in english is new for me, so I'm glad that you like it)
I like folklore and planning to write more in this style.

Елена Пурденко   01.12.2010 19:13   Заявить о нарушении