I wanna

I wanna this wasn't true
I wanna that night could last forever
I wanna be around you
I wanna you forget that letter.

I know I wasn't right
I know there's no forgiveness for me
I know it's just a fight
I know we'll throw it into the sea.

I thought I'm like a rock
I thought I have no feelings
I thought I won't live long
I thought I won't get back the breathing.

I wanna you not see this
I wanna you just don't know anything
I wanna you just be here
I wanna you hold me patiently.

7.11.2010
21:26


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the idea with this 'i wanna' add ons is great. the poem itself is weak 'though

Дэнвер Динозавр   25.05.2011 21:09     Заявить о нарушении
I'm just a beginner in writing in English. Anyway, thank you,

Лана Соул   26.05.2011 19:19   Заявить о нарушении