How does it feel when life is obscure?

Лета Гордеева

How does it feel when life's obscure?
Follow that anxiously scents of perfumes.
What if I interfuse to fill every cell
Of that body, destructing yourself?

Know you're special - the one of my kind;
Let's permit game, which'll take us some time.
We're all damned here, the world's too small -
Try, be delicate to another darned soul.

I'll be your beast, without being bad.
Both in the shades of stories, too mad.
Be there some passion, don't promise no pain -
What a price for a touch, driving insane.

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Of that body, distructing yourself?
vs
Of that body, distracting yourself?

Destructing???

WHY TO WRITE IN ENGLISH?????

Зус Вайман 09.09.2020 21:17 • Заявить о нарушении

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Thanks for helping to edit my old poem, but hold your attitude, please.

Лета Гордеева 09.09.2020 21:37 Заявить о нарушении

I am holding my virtual horses, but still...

WHAT FOR?

Зус Вайман 09.09.2020 21:43 Заявить о нарушении

Because there is a freedom of speech and expression in the world that I'm living in, yet my daughter is bilingual and my husband does not speak Russian. Does this answer suit you? I don't give an f to your opinion that one mistake can stop someone from writing, and I'm having a bad day. You could read a few more lines on my page before posting here, eg my last review. I am not on this site currently because I was waiting for your virtual horses to rage here.

Лета Гордеева 09.09.2020 21:51 Заявить о нарушении

TOO MANY MISTAKES IN GRAMMAR AND STYLE.

BECOME A RELATIVE PERFECTIONIST.

AND SHOW YOUR LINES TO A NATIVE SPEAKER

Зус Вайман 09.09.2020 21:56 Заявить о нарушении

My different lines were shown in different times to different proffessionals in literature, all native speakers.

Лета Гордеева 09.09.2020 22:06 Заявить о нарушении

And I have a 100% vision, you don't need a caps lock to talk to me.

Лета Гордеева 09.09.2020 22:10 Заявить о нарушении

My vision is weak

Зус Вайман 09.09.2020 23:12 Заявить о нарушении

Try pressing Ctrl+ on your keyboard to change the screen scale (or Ctrl- if you want it back to small), if you are using a computer.

Лета Гордеева 09.09.2020 23:42 Заявить о нарушении

I am reduced to a tablet, alas...

Зус Вайман 10.09.2020 13:15 Заявить о нарушении

I see. Sorry about your vision. I hope you know how to zoom stuff on your tablet. Not sure if it's possible to download a keyboard with the bigger letters.

Лета Гордеева 10.09.2020 15:19 Заявить о нарушении

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