You say, we're wrong together, you and me?
That it's too risky and you can't be sure,
Can't take that risk, but listen, mon amour,
What are relationships supposed to mean?
It's all about risks, an open soul
Could easily get hurt, and anytime
You get so scared of losing self-control,
But fear that, and not let me make you mine?
That look I see in your so lovely eyes,
Like I'm your child, for years lost and found,
It makes me weak, and yet it makes me proud,
And I'm afraid what if one day it dies...
So, please, let's close our eyes and drink the bliss,
We're only having it one time and wasting,
I want to vanish there, inside your kiss,
No curses anymore, but only blessing...
Argument
© Copyright: Мейлинг Ирина, 2010
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Oh, it is such a splendid piece of poetry. I have read it with breathless interest and have studied it very thoroughly that is I have paid attention to each word and each line. To a certain extent, it is not deprived of philisophy touches. My genuine thanks for your creative attitide towards writing.
Светлана Барашко 06.12.2010 15:11 • Заявить о нарушении
Светлана Барашко 06.12.2010 15:11 • Заявить о нарушении
thanks a lot for your appreciation..Good that a poem lives its own life!
Мейлинг Ирина 06.12.2010 23:44 Заявить о нарушении
Мейлинг Ирина 06.12.2010 23:44 Заявить о нарушении
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