Inside a dream

Inside a dream there is a river,
A silent flow to shining lands,
Where no-one ever cries and shiver
Takes breath away, misfortune ends...

Inside your heart there is a shelter
For anyone who's struck with pain;
There is an old forgotten letter
Once gently opened not in vain.


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I wonder, is it a vain that you wrote such a cool poem? =) It's really good...

Иринати   11.09.2010 23:38     Заявить о нарушении
Nothing happens in vain if there's enough pain.

Thank you for your appreciation, Irinaty! I appreciate it in return!

Томас Кромвель   11.09.2010 23:55   Заявить о нарушении
Can I get your ISQ number or anything like that? The deal is I have 1 question to you... I'm sorry for my strange appeal...=)

Иринати   12.09.2010 00:13   Заявить о нарушении
You know, I don't have ICQ but you can write to my mail
intelmind@mail.ru

Томас Кромвель   12.09.2010 12:38   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.