Ностальгия Зима
_________________Двойной триолет
Забыть тебя… по силам ли мне это?
куда ни глянь – слайд ретро-мелочей,
теряет кадры чувственных ночей,
забыть тебя… по силам ли мне это?
Тобой живу с заката до рассвета
и там, за исчезающим "Люблю..."
забыть пытаюсь, нужно ли мне это? –
сканировать век прошлый наяву...
Тобой живу с заката до рассвета,
листая календарную тоску,
кромсая словом дерзким пустоту...
Тобой живу с заката до рассвета,
а так зимой ждала глоточек лета –
дожди скользят слезами по стеклу...
Тобой живу с заката до рассвета,
вплетая нежность хрупкую в строку...
экспромт на:
http://www.stihi.ru/rec.html?2010/07/11/10407
© Copyright: Ностальгия Зима, 2010
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Олександр Воскобойник
тебе Забути... чи під силу мені це?
куди не глянь – дрібничок ретро- слайд,
розгублює чуттєвих кадрів прайт,
тебе забути... чи під силу мені це?
живу Тобою з заходу до сходу
і там, за відлітаючим "Люблю..."
забути намагаюся, навіщо це стелю? –
століття сканувать минулого погоду...
живу Тобою з заходу до сходу,
той календарний глум гортаючи на втечу,
шматуючи зухвалим словом порожнечу...
живу Тобою з заходу до сходу,
а так зимою хочеш літа воду –
дощі ковзають слізьми по склянках...
живу Тобою з заходу до сходу,
крихку вплітала ніжність
і вона в рядках...
©
Ностальгия Зима мой перевод
© Copyright: Александр Воскобойник, 2010
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Рецензии
Я в восхищении от речи и она имеет певческое начало, вот-вот сорвётся звуком и останется в памяти парящим мотыльком нежно-фиалкового цвета)
С теплом моей души, Nostalgie
Ностальгия Зима 14.07.2010 08:55 • Заявить о нарушении
С теплом моей души, Nostalgie
Ностальгия Зима 14.07.2010 08:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо Вам за стихотворение и тёплый отзыв!
Александр Воскобойник 14.07.2010 09:03 Заявить о нарушении
Александр Воскобойник 14.07.2010 09:03 Заявить о нарушении
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Александр Воскобойник 14.07.2010 21:43 Заявить о нарушении
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Александр Воскобойник 14.07.2010 21:43 Заявить о нарушении
обожаю котят! спасибо, он потрясающе симпатичный :)
Ностальгия Зима 14.07.2010 21:50 Заявить о нарушении
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