Опять ладит струна под перебор
Не те тона, не строит…
И видно что сегодня этот спор
Нам продолжать не стоит.
Беру аккорд, а мысли об одном,-
И дальше не пускают,
Я чувствую, как в городе чужом,
Тебя мне не хватает…
И я в своей тетрадке пару строк впишу не торопливо,
О том, как без тебя я одинок , и на душе тоскливо,
Я не хочу искать красивых слов их в рифму загоняя,
Но ты поверь, что очень мне нужна, моя родная…
Срываю свой аккорд и мне рывок, чтоб в небе закружиться,
Под звуки струн вхожу в прямой поток и не боюсь разбиться,
Ты лучшая на свете, ты моя, и потому спокоен,
Ведь ты гордишься мной, а значит я любви твоей достоин…
Александр Переверзин автор-исполнитель / 11 марта 2010г.
Песня по ссылке: http://www.realmusic.ru/a_pereverzin/
Ты лучшая на свете
© Copyright: Александр Переверзин, 2010
Свидетельство о публикации №110071000172
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Рецензии
Again string gets along... under the picking...
not those tones, no such building ...
It can be seen... today this dispute
to keep.... we don't need...
I take a chord... but all my thoughts stuck...
about one... won't let me go any further...
I'm feeling... how in alien city, I'm lone...
there is no you... I miss you...
And in my notebook... I'll write the lines slowly...
my heart is sad... without you it's so lonely...
I won't look nice words... drive them in rhyme,
but you believe... that I really need, my darling...
I break my chord... have a jerk into sky spinning...
By sounds strings... I'm entering direct stream...
and I'm not afraid break down..
You're the best in world, you're mine,
and therefore I'm silent...
After of all, you're proud me, it means..
to your love... I worthy...
http://www.next-portal.ru/composition/9187/
попробовала перевести... вот что получилось...
с нежностью.
Лучик.
Леди Лучик 16.06.2022 14:13 • Заявить о нарушении
not those tones, no such building ...
It can be seen... today this dispute
to keep.... we don't need...
I take a chord... but all my thoughts stuck...
about one... won't let me go any further...
I'm feeling... how in alien city, I'm lone...
there is no you... I miss you...
And in my notebook... I'll write the lines slowly...
my heart is sad... without you it's so lonely...
I won't look nice words... drive them in rhyme,
but you believe... that I really need, my darling...
I break my chord... have a jerk into sky spinning...
By sounds strings... I'm entering direct stream...
and I'm not afraid break down..
You're the best in world, you're mine,
and therefore I'm silent...
After of all, you're proud me, it means..
to your love... I worthy...
http://www.next-portal.ru/composition/9187/
попробовала перевести... вот что получилось...
с нежностью.
Лучик.
Леди Лучик 16.06.2022 14:13 • Заявить о нарушении
I'll beg you... do you hear?.. I will beg...
blindly... at random.. without looking back...
From those crows... that honor you by name,
but, behind your eyes...they foul and send...
I will beg you... with my songs...
let them sometimes - like a wolf's cry..
From these bitch paws... of your depression...
from roles, calls, cottages and belovers...
I'll beg you... from this intimacy of gossip,
from those raspaltsovok and insults, ***
I do not need... the flowers of your innocence,
you know... from flowers I'm sick.
I will beg you... with a hoarse voice.
on the exhale... sobbing... at any price.
From that incorruptible... stupid pride...
reminding her... that she isn't either saint...
I'll beg you...with not true... with truth.
I'll laugh... at those crows... and at last...
Let everyone say... that I'm falling so low,
to fly, I heard, it's more fun...in embrace...
Let everyone say... that you aren't so arranged,
that your lust... will wipe nose at my prayers.
I'll beg you... whatever those takes...
I need this... more...than you... you'll see...
from those ruspins and insults... ***
Let everyone say = Let allone say...
можно так и так... :)
http://www.runetmusic.ru/tracks/14331/
Вот такой получился перевод...
этой замечательной песни...
попыталась уложиться в ритм...
с нежностью.
Леди Лучик 16.06.2022 12:27 Заявить о нарушении
blindly... at random.. without looking back...
From those crows... that honor you by name,
but, behind your eyes...they foul and send...
I will beg you... with my songs...
let them sometimes - like a wolf's cry..
From these bitch paws... of your depression...
from roles, calls, cottages and belovers...
I'll beg you... from this intimacy of gossip,
from those raspaltsovok and insults, ***
I do not need... the flowers of your innocence,
you know... from flowers I'm sick.
I will beg you... with a hoarse voice.
on the exhale... sobbing... at any price.
From that incorruptible... stupid pride...
reminding her... that she isn't either saint...
I'll beg you...with not true... with truth.
I'll laugh... at those crows... and at last...
Let everyone say... that I'm falling so low,
to fly, I heard, it's more fun...in embrace...
Let everyone say... that you aren't so arranged,
that your lust... will wipe nose at my prayers.
I'll beg you... whatever those takes...
I need this... more...than you... you'll see...
from those ruspins and insults... ***
Let everyone say = Let allone say...
можно так и так... :)
http://www.runetmusic.ru/tracks/14331/
Вот такой получился перевод...
этой замечательной песни...
попыталась уложиться в ритм...
с нежностью.
Леди Лучик 16.06.2022 12:27 Заявить о нарушении
Write me a letter...
disperse, please, these gloomy clouds
What I kept in my soul -
in this hung not pouring rain ...
From a heart to a heart
send your beam caressing..
We sometimes half of lives -
are waiting for attention and warmth...
Write me a letter,
on a receipt or on a ticket ..
On a luxury card
draw casually a couple of lines -
With amazingly brush -
never seen in the world...
By a musical hand
was written the wonderful rock!
Write me letter,
as you write, tear, and throw through wind -
Let a tramp carry
through summer... in November dank night ...
Nothing - with calendar
and not important to me... the cardinal points
Without you I'm cold in South -
without you, it is winter for me...
There last many years -
as I hide love... in a bar on the top shelf...
Many years I'm alone
among the orchestra - I am solo one ...
Like a bow - my soul
flies up and into abyss - for a long time ...
Write me a letter-
make me a kind good start...
Write me a letter...
it will be the forgiveness of farewell
For your love not for me,
for my love... that is more than my life...
I forgave you all things
and I ask: keep your sensery promises
Write about forgiveness
at least a few sincere words.
http://www.next-portal.ru/composition/16899/
Вот такой получился перевод... этой замечательной песни..
попытылась вписаться в ритм...
с нежностью.
Леди Лучик 16.06.2022 12:37 Заявить о нарушении
disperse, please, these gloomy clouds
What I kept in my soul -
in this hung not pouring rain ...
From a heart to a heart
send your beam caressing..
We sometimes half of lives -
are waiting for attention and warmth...
Write me a letter,
on a receipt or on a ticket ..
On a luxury card
draw casually a couple of lines -
With amazingly brush -
never seen in the world...
By a musical hand
was written the wonderful rock!
Write me letter,
as you write, tear, and throw through wind -
Let a tramp carry
through summer... in November dank night ...
Nothing - with calendar
and not important to me... the cardinal points
Without you I'm cold in South -
without you, it is winter for me...
There last many years -
as I hide love... in a bar on the top shelf...
Many years I'm alone
among the orchestra - I am solo one ...
Like a bow - my soul
flies up and into abyss - for a long time ...
Write me a letter-
make me a kind good start...
Write me a letter...
it will be the forgiveness of farewell
For your love not for me,
for my love... that is more than my life...
I forgave you all things
and I ask: keep your sensery promises
Write about forgiveness
at least a few sincere words.
http://www.next-portal.ru/composition/16899/
Вот такой получился перевод... этой замечательной песни..
попытылась вписаться в ритм...
с нежностью.
Леди Лучик 16.06.2022 12:37 Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо Вам огромное, Леди Лучик!) Весьма неожиданно ... Но почему закрыта ваша страница ?
Александр Переверзин 20.10.2022 20:55 Заявить о нарушении
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