Шлейфом тишины ночной...

штиль на море...всколыхнула...налетевшая волна...
в вихре жарком...закрутила...унесла под небеса...
бесконечных ласк полночных...с поцелуями тепла...
трепет горечи порочной...искрометной...до утра...

виражами извивалась... витражами разбивалась...
на кусочки раскололась... и осколками впивалась...
зачарованно-влюбленной...страстью бури...неги томной..
отдавалась...гулким эхом...отдалялась горьким смехом...

утопала... в неге пены... улетала ввысь с тобой...
утихая... понемногу... разрывалась вновь... грозой...
отвечала... ласкам страсти... не боясь растаять вновь...
от молвы... и от измены... шлейфом тишины ночной...

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Calm on sea... stirred up... crashing wave...
In hot whirlwind... twisted... took to the skies...
Endless caresses of night... with warm kisses...
Thrill vicious bitterness...sparkling...until sunrise ...

Wriggled around...shattered with stained glass...
Broken into pieces... penetrate by fragments...
Enchanted love...passion storm...languid bliss..
It gave off... booming of echo...laughed bitterly...

Drowned... in bliss of foam...flew up with you...
Quieting... little by little...torn apart... by a storm..
Answered...passion caresses...not afraid to melt...
From rumors...of treason...trail of silence night...

вдохновение
http://www.stihi.ru/2010/07/04/4055
Нежной веточкой сирени голубеют небеса...

Штиль на море...всколыхнула...
налетевшая волна...
В вихре жарком...закрутила...
унесла под небеса...
Бесконечных ласк полночных...
с поцелуями тепла...
Трепет горечи порочной...
искрометной...до утра...

Виражами извивалась...
витражами разбивалась...
На кусочки раскололась...
и осколками впивалась...
Зачарованно-влюбленной...
страстью бури...неги томной..
Отдавалась...гулким эхом...
отдалялась горьким смехом...

Утопала... в неге пены...
улетала ввысь с тобой...
Утихая... понемногу...
разрывалась вновь... грозой...
Отвечала... ласкам страсти...
не боясь растаять вновь...
От молвы... и от измены...
шлейфом тишины ночной...


Рецензии
Delusional thoughts... city is covered in granite...
longing gnaws... like poison... it beckons ...
Eight o'clock... time's tearing up with uncertainty ...
To wait?..or to leave?.. if he doesn’t come?..
Stupidity?... the thinnest nets?.. thread?..
I really want to ... then to howl like a wolf...
Trembling on skin... rain drops on my cheek...
tears?.. dropping... like in a ferris wheel...

***
Grottoes in rock... on steps at the entrance...
shadows... crawling in... before sunrise...
Secrets of the earth... hiding in the depths ...
eternal torment... and sounds... from outside...

Somewhere... sneaking... lurking and crying...
hidden in the past... sunbeam... is it dying?..
In velvet of night... but... again streaming myrrh...
earthly happiness... prophesies hope ...

It will burst into dawn ... it will rain ...
pampered in the morning... on a sunny day...
It will become great... it will drive away all fears...
subtle tenderness ... will cover with love ...

Quiet expanse... between earth and sky...
extinguishes resentment... trembles after ...
Having drunk fright ... it'll be born as a thunder...
streams of rain... tension will washed away...

***
To be with you?.. it seemed...
like a miracle to me...
Happiness?.. came to us again...
but... love... dropped down dishes...
turned... peace into bedlam...

Smiling... hiding hope...
reflecting on a window pane...
I'll be the one to blame...
if feelings attract you... again...

If a blizzard?.. on the heart is rain...
and a blizzard... iridescent dreams...
Is that love?.. ready for you...
to be a victim... and a mystery again...

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 10:19     Заявить о нарушении
Again... I'm at the cherished warmth...
where meeting place... becomes an altar...
You know... I'm alway waiting for you...
in a rush of night... reflected in the day...

Where sound of rain isn't water in the sky...
where the wind is not a play of words...
There eternity... is reflected in the eyes...
stealing peace... composes origami ..

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 10:31   Заявить о нарушении
Trembling body... again on the glass...
I can see... your disappearing shadow...
Silver hope... like flame... of rainbow...
is it fire?.. as agony... thoughts multiply...

Beckons to itself... the attraction of love?..
hurricane... will drag you into embraces...
Forgotten feelings... a stupid magnet...
will attract you inside... like a needle...

Not the grief... not sadness... the words?..
to live again?.. plunging into the slumbers...
Dissolving in dreams... called in world?..
it's familiar... terracotta reflection...

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 10:56   Заявить о нарушении
In your arms... I melt like ice...
ardor of feelings?.. raging flame...
Delight of love?.. burning bonfire...
explodes pulse... douses with poison...

Love?.. or passion... quiet... unearthly...
when... fusion of souls and bodies... joy...
Desires whisper... behind your back...
breaks loops... that become an obstacle...

And heat of cheeks... beckons again...
doesn't breathe fumes... the love flame...
Shimmering nakedness... crushing...
be tipsy... on a satin blanket...

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 11:29   Заявить о нарушении
To love?.. and to be your joy?..
merging... reverberating in a silence...
Love is blind... and delights the eyes...
and whispers... revelations in a dream...

Vice... tenderness... feelings unbecoming...
to wander like a beggar... to forgive fate?..
For fact that... wasn't enough... attraction...
axis of the Earth... doesn't spin from outside..

Perhaps... something fragile broke?..
and memory?.. doesn't try to understand...
The wrinkled pages?.. can't be fixed...
and your heart?.. again... continues to wait...

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 11:54   Заявить о нарушении
Worlds... where wanderings become a mystery...
where cherished love... never take a sip...
Hope and faith... became a game... random?..
where sea wave... again licks the gray sand...

There... where pines... by tops - in the sky....
where to hot love... is released a short time...
The outlines of shadows... turn into fiction...
on the planet Earth... did God once live?...

The endless chains... plains and rivers...
continuation of life - in the legends of ages...
Wars?... blood?.. there... betraying a man...
broke the trails... of disappearing cities...

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 12:28   Заявить о нарушении
Pursuit of happiness?.. you've to be in time...
to catch the train... to your native home...
A string of pillars... but... time's like a whipe...
won't let you miss... not a crumb of a break...

The sea of ​​whims... insincerity?.. collapse?..
bitterness of resentment... a wave of regret...
Washes away plaque... in enchanted dreams...
and again... immerses... in excitement of dates ...

Invisible thread... that connected the paths...
resignedly torn... giving birth to annoyance...
And how can I live?.. and how can I find?...
love?.. and hope?.. on a path to spring garden...

Where roses bloom... confessions don't lie...
feelings are bright... as a result of inspiration...
Fidelity and tenderness... waiting with hope...
there're secrets of love... surrounded by luck...

Луиза Алиса   10.06.2022 13:09   Заявить о нарушении
Жизнь... полоснула отчаяньем...
где же?.. твои обещания?..
Счастье... любовь и нежность...
канули... в неизбежность!..

Искренность?.. пахнет вереском..
время - в потоке горечи...
В снах затерялось... мерностью...
стало порывом... нечести...

Столько не счесть.... страдания?...
в горе разлук - все почести...
Мир окаянный - топчется...
вальс пустоты? - пророчества..

Леди Лучик   12.06.2022 05:01   Заявить о нарушении
Life... slashed with despair...
where?.. your promises?..
Happiness... love and tenderness...
sunk?.. into inevitability!..

Sincerity?.. smells like heather..
time is in the flow of bitterness...
Lost in dreams... dimension...
became an impulse... wickedness...

So much to count... suffering?..
in grief of parting - all honors...
The cursed world is trampling...
waltz of the void? - prophecy...

Леди Лучик   12.06.2022 05:07   Заявить о нарушении
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