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Suddenly in coloured lights of darkness once I understood
Painful truth, which told me: something in my life was wrong.
Remember, what I was, watch what I am,imagine what I could...
The only thing I know is if I didn’t die, i just became more strong.
Drugs changed too many minds in Moscow, London, Tokyo, Hongkong,
They even made me to write down this song,
The road to the brightest stars in dark blue sky took me too long,
I’ve got to make a difficult decision, to whom or what do I belong.
23.10.2005
Suddenly in coloured lights of darkness once I und
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My fleeting impression is that the verse has a deal with the long lines. They are longer than they are easy to say about. Just wrenched a little.
One more thing...
"...if I didn’t die, i just became more strong." - Can you explain the tense?
And... You're good in the clou! The topic is great! Thank you.
Максим Митрофанов 2 30.04.2010 20:46 • Заявить о нарушении
One more thing...
"...if I didn’t die, i just became more strong." - Can you explain the tense?
And... You're good in the clou! The topic is great! Thank you.
Максим Митрофанов 2 30.04.2010 20:46 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank You for valuable remarks))) my explanation about the tense,in which my world exists could seem rather strange,though i can tell You the other meaning of this words-it's well-known: "What does not kill me, makes me stronger" - Fridrich Nicshe
Анна Стессель 30.04.2010 21:10 Заявить о нарушении
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