Dare

Where am I now,
If not in a maze?

Why am I here,
If not for a reason?

Why are you here,
If I'm here at peace?

Why would you come here,
To poison my dreams?

Your answer is love,
But i disagree.
So gravely mistaken
You must have been.
What one would mistake
For anger and hate,
Your mind was able,
To stay alive and awake.
It was able to see through, the fog in my brain,
And tear of my mask and get closer again.


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The rhyme, the rhyme, the rhyme... Too long sometimes. Thank you.

Максим Митрофанов 2   21.04.2010 16:25     Заявить о нарушении
I agree, but sometimes we need long rhymes to express ourselves
Thank you, really nice to see that someone's reading:)

Тигран Хачатурянц   21.04.2010 16:30   Заявить о нарушении