"You'll never break the heart of stone"...
("The Rolling Stones")
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О, душа, стань холодной как ветер,
Что пронзает тело насквозь,
Выметая память о лете,
Превращая тепло в мороз.
Сердце, стань холодным как камень,
Как гранит на реке Неве,
Когда скована она льдами,
Не мечтая еще о весне.
Будет сердце алмаза крепче,
Ты уйдешь, и тогда, может быть,
Мне дышать станет чуточку легче,
И смогу я тебя забыть...
The Heart of Stone
© Copyright: Наталья Куори, 2010
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imho
it's so beautyful - the poem.. just perfect..
meantime.. those people to leave us - maybe, it's just a way of theirs? - a traectory of their own?
because of some .. heartbreakers?
I would even insist - we should take care of our feelings much more than about having their casual reasons nearby..
is it unusual? - is self-sacrificing more of habit?.. let's make our choice freely..
sincerely,
Дмитрий Краев Рэм 23.04.2010 10:08 • Заявить о нарушении
it's so beautyful - the poem.. just perfect..
meantime.. those people to leave us - maybe, it's just a way of theirs? - a traectory of their own?
because of some .. heartbreakers?
I would even insist - we should take care of our feelings much more than about having their casual reasons nearby..
is it unusual? - is self-sacrificing more of habit?.. let's make our choice freely..
sincerely,
Дмитрий Краев Рэм 23.04.2010 10:08 • Заявить о нарушении
Yes, i transformed it then to a poetry because i had no choice. But if the feeling mutual and strong it will surely bring heartbreak(s) at some point unless you are VERY lucky person and having happily ever after.. I didn't quite understand what you meant about taking care of our feelings more. They come and go and I can hardly control the effect they bring into my life. can you take care of them?? then you have to be in sm kind of yoga movement.. :)
Наталья Куори 23.04.2010 20:18 Заявить о нарушении
Наталья Куори 23.04.2010 20:18 Заявить о нарушении
Yes, i transformed it then to a poetry because i had no choice. But if the feeling mutual and strong it will surely bring heartbreak(s) at some point unless you are VERY lucky person and having happily ever after.. I didn't quite understand what you meant about taking care of our feelings more. They come and go and I can hardly control the effect they bring into my life. can you take care of them?? then you have to be in sm kind of yoga movement.. :)
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sould agree with you, with pleasure ))
then - no movement, sort of usual lonelyness from one side & feelings opened to the world around from other side
taking care of your feelings - they come as a spring, holyday, blossoming.. the reason of this celebration might not be in a course of all of it.. or opposit - might be just wishing to enjoy himself with you & say goodbye.. let's not bury those feelings with that heartbreaker's leaving.. it deserves better..
sincerely,
Дмитрий Краев Рэм 24.04.2010 13:59 Заявить о нарушении
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sould agree with you, with pleasure ))
then - no movement, sort of usual lonelyness from one side & feelings opened to the world around from other side
taking care of your feelings - they come as a spring, holyday, blossoming.. the reason of this celebration might not be in a course of all of it.. or opposit - might be just wishing to enjoy himself with you & say goodbye.. let's not bury those feelings with that heartbreaker's leaving.. it deserves better..
sincerely,
Дмитрий Краев Рэм 24.04.2010 13:59 Заявить о нарушении