New song

On the burnt Earth
Under the damned Sun
There are two roads
For you to run...

The first one is dark,
It leads to your soul...
Life's a dangerous shark:
Anyway you will fall...

But the second road streams
To a fathomless pit,
Everything only seems
But you don't see it...

So you run beeing blind,
Having no guiding ray,
And your aim is to find
The particular way.

16.02.10

Написано во время урока теоретической фонетики...:)


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The rythm needs to be somewhat worked at a bit more :-) But I like the way you think. Thanks and good luck :-)

Базилевич Олег   18.02.2010 14:24     Заявить о нарушении
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