Something’s just to appear,
Somebody has called my name,
But I’ll run away to be clear
Through the wall of the damnable shame…
Something’s taking me over
The heads of the blackening people,
Somebody has got me for all the
Things which are so simple…
The angels are flying to hasten
To be in the paradise trees…
But I don’t want it to be lasting,
I’m begging you while on my knees…
3.02.2010 (5:48pm)
(Book 14 "Foursquare", cycle 79 "In The Lines")
I m Begging You While On My Knees
© Copyright: Максим Митрофанов 2, 2010
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Hi,
How about to change a bit the line:
"But I’ll run away to be clear" to
"But I’ll run away, in the clear," in the clear - idiom - Free from burdens or dangers)
Юрий Лазирко 11.02.2010 22:18 • Заявить о нарушении
How about to change a bit the line:
"But I’ll run away to be clear" to
"But I’ll run away, in the clear," in the clear - idiom - Free from burdens or dangers)
Юрий Лазирко 11.02.2010 22:18 • Заявить о нарушении
I thank you for the change but the lines are not to be changed... It's fixed somehow. I'm glad that your knowledge of English is very good. It's of rare kinds. Keep it. You're a talent. Thank you once more.
Максим Митрофанов 2 12.02.2010 09:30 Заявить о нарушении
Максим Митрофанов 2 12.02.2010 09:30 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 3 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.
