I came across her photo in a frame...
And glanced at dark-grey colour...
Is there a person I should blame?
Myself, who kept it out of fire...
So many times I tried to burn it down,
Pretend to be too hard and dour,
But there are things, that can't be done
Some things, I never will assure...
New day will come, and I will damn myself
For actions, thoughts and speeches,
I said to you time and again
And will anew... I'm such a creature...
28.01.2010
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but - be on guard!
A good verse, really! It's a kind of inner monologue, very open and frank. To my taste, it would be better in the last line: "I'm such a creature"...
Best regards,
Валерий Шувалов 28.01.2010 23:25 Заявить о нарушении
Your colleague,
Nick.
P.S. Forgive me for the delay of my answer.
Николай Порада 03.02.2010 17:57 Заявить о нарушении