Please stay…Please turn your face to mine…
Please talk to me as long as your tongue talking…
I'm here not to say good-bye
But to prevent my heart from hateful locking…
As long as you are close I'm calm and peaceful
As soon as gone my body wails at gale…
I cry and shout, shrill and mourn when walking
Away from you back to domestic jail…
There is no one to be accused of cheating…
I've grown older…Fears all have gone…
I've made my choice and lovesome overheated
I share feelings hot and true headlong…
Predictions fail but …YEAH!…
I fall in autumn!
The wind strips trees
And bares longing heart…
And drags me back
To shores by crystal waters
Of love illicit ocean
Scapeless start…
Please stay...
© Copyright: Оксана Соловьева, 2010
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I consider that the verse is fine. You were lucky to demonstrate a mixture of feelings. The last lines are particularly catching. In general, everything is up to the point, every word is appropriate. Many candid thanks for your poetry. Yours sincerely, Svetlana.
Светлана Барашко 10.01.2011 16:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Светлана Барашко 10.01.2011 16:43 • Заявить о нарушении
It was really pleasant to get this comment and I am glad that you enjoyed reading the poem!:)
Оксана Соловьева 10.01.2011 17:29 Заявить о нарушении
Оксана Соловьева 10.01.2011 17:29 Заявить о нарушении
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