One time we were born,
One time we are dyeing,
And we don’t return,
And you will be crying.
But also one time
We meet you on sky –
The life after death
Is really fine.
14.11.05г.
One time we were born
© Copyright: Алёна Молотилина, 2009
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It is a really beautiful poem!
But I think *dying* (the 2-nd line) is more correct than *dieing*.
And the 7-th line, they say *after death*, not *after die*.
If there were music, it would be able to become a wonderful song!
Елена Заостровцева 19.02.2010 12:54 • Заявить о нарушении
But I think *dying* (the 2-nd line) is more correct than *dieing*.
And the 7-th line, they say *after death*, not *after die*.
If there were music, it would be able to become a wonderful song!
Елена Заостровцева 19.02.2010 12:54 • Заявить о нарушении
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