Oh, see, it's been too long
My love, once risen, now wither
In former days, oh, I remember
How used we to be member
I see how we were happy
When we were younger, were so sappy
But it has gone, gone with those words
That you have told me; scrappy chords
It's only reminiscences to leave
About the happiness that I received
And lost, it was my fault
I didn't even try to hold
Time patches injuries, but crushes souls
Oh, how could I have been that fool
You loved me, I loved you
But it's because of me that now we both endure
The love of us did not last long
A week, but just that only week
I'd probably change for all my life
But it was worth it, reached the peak...
Too Long
© Copyright: Крэг Джонсон, 2009
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ритмика все-таки немного рвется,и кое-какие опечатки в первом четверостишье, а так очень даже трогательно..и есть очень интересные находки!
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