A cloudy, cold, but open sky...
Don't matter if there is a bar,
Just give me wings and I will fly
Through every obstacle to stars!..
Let's fly with me, you won't regret,
You'll see the world, where dreams come true,
We'll cleave our way through every net -
You will love me, and I'll love you...
This world is really far away
And only heart will bring us there,
But if you find, be sure, you'll stay...
The world of dreams... the world of care...
And clouds will vanish at the time
When every song give us love rhyme...
Love Rhyme
© Copyright: Мария Поляева, 2009
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What a beautiful sonnet!
I really like it.
Best,
Dina
Беляева Дина 21.10.2009 21:39 • Заявить о нарушении
I really like it.
Best,
Dina
Беляева Дина 21.10.2009 21:39 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks, Dina! *happy smile* Your reviews make me sure that I shouldn't stop writings in English... I'm just not sure about the correctness of my grammar... *blush*
Мария Поляева 22.10.2009 15:35 Заявить о нарушении
Мария Поляева 22.10.2009 15:35 Заявить о нарушении
Maria,
You have a good feelign for the language.
There may be some mistakes (as we all make them), but that shouldn't discourage you. After all that's how you can improve your understanding of grammar. If you don't mind I can point out errors whenever I see them.
Happy writing!
Dina
Беляева Дина 22.10.2009 16:22 Заявить о нарушении
You have a good feelign for the language.
There may be some mistakes (as we all make them), but that shouldn't discourage you. After all that's how you can improve your understanding of grammar. If you don't mind I can point out errors whenever I see them.
Happy writing!
Dina
Беляева Дина 22.10.2009 16:22 Заявить о нарушении
Surely, Dina! I don't mind, really! :) That'll be very helpful for me, thank You! :)
Always at Your service,
Maria
Мария Поляева 22.10.2009 16:41 Заявить о нарушении
Always at Your service,
Maria
Мария Поляева 22.10.2009 16:41 Заявить о нарушении