The Crazy Starcaptain

The sun is shining brightly,
my dreams are coming true
Do you remember who am I and who are you?
Hold me with your cold hand,
don't say 'good bye'
Do you remember who are you and who am I?

And if you'll go away
You'll never see
The crazy starfall in my eyes.
And if you go away
You'll never be
the crazy startreveller who flies to the new stars.

We're running on the rainbow
we're sinking in sunset
Do you remember who are we and who are they?
We're those who see and search
we're those who live
Do you remember who are they and who are we?

And if you'll go away
you'll never see
the sky in my crazy eyes merges with sea
And if you'll go away
you'll never be
the crazy starcaptain of the spaceship named 'we'.

Hold me with your warm hand
you said me 'yes!'
and we shall fly to our spase!

And if you'll go away
you'll never see
the sky in my crazy eyes merges with sea
And if you'll go away
you'll never be
the crazy starcaptain of the spaceship named 'we'.


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Oh, sorry once more.
After "if" the future tense is never used!
The first part must be in the present tense (Present Indefinite). The second one is to be in the future tense. For example: "I'll leave if he comes".
Danke.

Максим Митрофанов 2   18.02.2010 14:45     Заявить о нарушении
Oh, thank you very much, Максим!
So, may I say - "and if you walk away, you'll never see"? or does it need to swap the parts of the sentence?

Елена Неженцева   19.02.2010 01:48   Заявить о нарушении