Vanity Fair

("I'd like to read U'r poetry... Mr. Gladdings"*)
(Preamble from the book "Vanity Fair")


Oh! Lord! - please give my Prescious H.E.A.R.T.
A little bit... more - shining stars
I'd like to be with... - spend my time
Without - a lonely Days and Nights.

Please - spinnig round your door - with Flavors* -
With grascious Smile of her Embrace
And - gives' her - Charming - out of Madness
And say - 'ma* Might - 't will Be - the same.

Her fascination' - makes Frustrations'
And govern rules - without Exceptions
My mind - is wash ma brain - in Darkness
Collect my S.O.U.L. - with freshness Sadness. 

Her touchings' - will to space my B.O.D.Y.'s -
Where' - i beleve - L.O.V.E.'s not in Vain
I'd said to her - My Gracious Darly's* -
Please - stay Awhile - for Night'n'Day.

Oh! Lord! - Apologize - my Feelings
My L.O.V.E.'s - wont whirling in the Sky
'Cause - there's a Flor* - ma Sultan's Being's*
My L.I.F.E. - desires to blaze* 't* Her Eyes*.


Notes by the book "Vanity Fair"
*"Почитайте мне свои Стихи... Мистер Глэдинс"
*Flavor - Flavour (am.eng.)
*ma - my
*Darly - Darling ("Darly's" - here - addressing to... - by the book)
*Flor - Flower ("Darling", "Pretty (Lady)" - by the book)
*Being's - (here - (readalble and recognizable as) addressing to... - by the book)
*blaze - stare, gaze
*'t - at (here - is abb. of "at")
*Her Eyes - Blue Eyes (br.eng.) - or "Whiskey's Marchins" (am.eng) (here - Blue Eyes - by  the book)


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A pure delight, this FAIR of yours. Or should I say THE UNIVERSE ?

It's jolly good, bro!

keep at it!

amicably,

Эркин Чиял   28.09.2009 09:55     Заявить о нарушении
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