I still remember my hometown.
It was like prison, but it was mine.
Just walking under darkened skies.
Will I return there? I don’t mind.
You left without saying goodbye.
My memories say I could have tried.
But I just didn’t, I fell apart
And now I’m here playing like God.
This fog and lies, and all the same.
I’ve just connected a stupid game.
This night I saw the same old dream.
And there were only you and me.
There was I, standing in the rain.
There was I, soaring of pain.
And I was happy, you could see.
You called me by my simple name.
I woke up, I realized
That was a dream, nightmare of mine.
These empty faces all around.
Someday I’ll finally be down.
But now I’m here. I stand alone.
Not happy. Not at least just gone.
My lies are blind leading the blind.
And so I stand on my knees and I just bleed in the streetlight.
I still remember
© Copyright: Денис Кленовкин, 2009
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And I was happy, you could see.
You[’ve called] me by my simple name.
I woke up, I realized
That was a dream, nightmare of mine.
***
Whether it's a typo or whatever, the square-bracketed is definitely a Grammar mistake.
...The rest is for those who understand the poem.
Best wishes,
V.C.
PS: Check the poem - there are other mistakes as well.
Вячеслав Четин 22.09.2009 01:36 • Заявить о нарушении
You[’ve called] me by my simple name.
I woke up, I realized
That was a dream, nightmare of mine.
***
Whether it's a typo or whatever, the square-bracketed is definitely a Grammar mistake.
...The rest is for those who understand the poem.
Best wishes,
V.C.
PS: Check the poem - there are other mistakes as well.
Вячеслав Четин 22.09.2009 01:36 • Заявить о нарушении