Come undone

Trying to pretend
That I can’t feel the pain,
That my heart is made of stone,
Full of regret,
Running away in shame,
Hiding, coming undone.
I still recall
Your dark and coldest eyes.
But you are forever gone.
I’m ready to fall
Poisoned by this sweetest lies,
Suffocating, coming undone.
Whispering words…
No one science can find the cure.
I’m trying so hard to be strong.
Praying Lord
To make my heart empty and pure.
I still want you, coming undone.
I am so tired
To carry on this cross,
To sing this tearful song.
I never lied
When I said that I am all yours.
So, why I am coming undone?
My sacrifices,
Too many people I killed for you.
But for you I was always wrong.
Listen to my cries!
You can’t see in me anything new,
Watch me die, let me come undone.
I still kiss
In my dreams your magic face.
Just for you I am all alone.
I still miss
Those incredible beautiful days,
Can’t believe I am coming undone.
Drunk of my life
You finally step on the other side.
I was waiting for you for too long.
Time to say «good-bye».
I gave you everything from the inside.
But for me you’ll never come undone.


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"My sacrifices,
Too many people I killed for you"
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Татиана Комарова   27.11.2009 21:12     Заявить о нарушении
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Ди Блэк   27.11.2009 22:06   Заявить о нарушении