Crush me again

Cut after cut
You are trying to kill me with words
You are trying to scar me for good
Cut after cut
Do you even know how it hurts?
Do you think I am carved out of wood?!

Time after time
And I know nothing’s going to change
Though you’ve promised me dozens of times
Time after time
And I stand still in your fire-range
Trying to shield myself with my rimes

Fall after fall
And I beg my crushed heart not to care-
I don’t think I can take any more
Fall after fall
And soon there’s nothing left to repair
Just the shatters that lie on the floor

Tear after tear
And I feel them scorching my skin
Going deeper to my very core
Tear after tear
And my soul is in tatters - you win
You have beaten your own record score


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Мне кажется, у Вас получается развивать тему, когда чувства находят воплощение во все новых и новых образах или, наоборот, образ все дорисовывается и дорисовывается. )

Марина Ермолова   18.10.2009 23:30     Заявить о нарушении