На стихотворение «Придумай меня...» (Юлия Каракшева)
Ты придумай меня и прости
За любые мои прегрешения
Те, что будут ещё впереди
И остались по ходу движения
Ты придумай меня меня по утру
Если некогда можешь в обед
Словно мел я ладонью сотру
Негатив твоих прожитых лет
Ты придумай мне имя и рост
Нарисуй глубину моих глаз
Мир вокруг поразительно прост
Только нет в простоте этой нас
Ты придумай меня и прости
© Copyright: Человек Дождя Человек Дождя, 2009
Свидетельство о публикации №109070202114
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..Почему нет "нас"!!!??? Грустно. Очень красиво!!!
Благодарна Вам душой, Человек дождя!
Алеся Голузина 02.07.2009 18:32 • Заявить о нарушении
Благодарна Вам душой, Человек дождя!
Алеся Голузина 02.07.2009 18:32 • Заявить о нарушении
Давайте не будем грустить, ок???!!!Даже немножечко!..
Алеся Голузина 02.07.2009 18:41 Заявить о нарушении
Алеся Голузина 02.07.2009 18:41 Заявить о нарушении
:-))Вот и замечательно!!!!:-)))Держите - звёздочку от меня :-)На удачу!!! Спасибо за прогулку в лунном дожде!!!!
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Алеся Голузина 02.07.2009 19:35 Заявить о нарушении
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Алеся Голузина 02.07.2009 19:35 Заявить о нарушении
Но тогда ещё был звездопад....звездопад
Человек Дождя Человек Дождя 02.07.2009 19:41 Заявить о нарушении
Человек Дождя Человек Дождя 02.07.2009 19:41 Заявить о нарушении
Пожалуйста!:-))вот такой?..
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