It was so real
it wasn't dust
I could feel
It was in past
It wasn't dream
It was just play
I wanted scream
It was like pain...
I wanted run,
I wanted fall,
You were the one
Who played with doll*.
14/06/09
* говорится О кукле, которая всеми играла, doll who played with everybody
It was...
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если я не ошибаюсь(а можетя и ошибаюсь)правильно будет
It was as pain...like это внешнее сходство...помойму:)
Сильно только на меня за это не кричите, я к тесту по англискому готовлюсь вот и читаю стихи на англиском.интересно очень:)
а вообще прикольно.у меня сколько не пробовал не получалосm на англиском писать стихи...поэтому восхищаюсь теми у кого это получается:)
People spoke that friendship and love will diу without the Hope...
Arcade Fire...
Миро Грэй 16.06.2009 23:22 • Заявить о нарушении
It was as pain...like это внешнее сходство...помойму:)
Сильно только на меня за это не кричите, я к тесту по англискому готовлюсь вот и читаю стихи на англиском.интересно очень:)
а вообще прикольно.у меня сколько не пробовал не получалосm на англиском писать стихи...поэтому восхищаюсь теми у кого это получается:)
People spoke that friendship and love will diу without the Hope...
Arcade Fire...
Миро Грэй 16.06.2009 23:22 • Заявить о нарушении
Well, dear Miro! My answer will be your english lesson!
Grammar is very important, what you are study it, the same is with Russian language. But as for real life, we speak like we want. I agree that sometimes my grammar can not to be proper.... coz it's language of life not grammar. And one moment) Poetry! Sometimes we change the stress ot smth like that, so we can change "as" to "like" and vice versa if it would sound better.
I know you gonna be able to write in english, you just need more practice! First you should think in english and speak it fast.
I wish you good luck with your english test!
Best regards,
Gatita.
Гатита 17.06.2009 00:57 Заявить о нарушении
Grammar is very important, what you are study it, the same is with Russian language. But as for real life, we speak like we want. I agree that sometimes my grammar can not to be proper.... coz it's language of life not grammar. And one moment) Poetry! Sometimes we change the stress ot smth like that, so we can change "as" to "like" and vice versa if it would sound better.
I know you gonna be able to write in english, you just need more practice! First you should think in english and speak it fast.
I wish you good luck with your english test!
Best regards,
Gatita.
Гатита 17.06.2009 00:57 Заявить о нарушении
sorry, for mistakes i made, i was hurrying up.
there shouldn't be 'to' after modal verb....and 'that' in spite of 'what'
Гатита 17.06.2009 00:59 Заявить о нарушении
there shouldn't be 'to' after modal verb....and 'that' in spite of 'what'
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