Adversary s mercy

Away, away, just go away,
Go away, don’t be slow, don’t turn.
Just save, just save, just save yourself
Even I will stay alone.

How much, how much I know about you?
It doesn’t mean that you must be shy.
Just sign, just sign, my sentence sign
And I stop, maybe stop, to lie.

Say why, say why I’m out of luck
I wonder how I can be so cruel.
It was cool, I was mad. ‘So what?’ – I said
And you asked if it wasn’t bad.

Away, away, just go away,
Go away, don’t be slow, don’t turn.
Just save, just save, just save yourself
Even I will stay alone.
 
Even…
I will stay alone.
Don’t turn!
I want to stay alone.


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Not bad at all! Very nice!
Just a few small comments, this would be more like they would say:
don’t be slow - don't slow down
Don’t turn! - don't turn around

Best regards,
Marina

Марина Хрусталёва   27.05.2009 05:21     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for Your verse addition and as well as for Your opinion. Inspire people around and be inspired!

Глорэдель   27.05.2009 09:36   Заявить о нарушении
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