Dialogue between soul and reason

Soul: I'm alive, but you don't see,
Invisible being so hard.
And when you think about me
I understand I need your ward.

Often I'm angry myself,
When I want to cry I can't do it.
And then I ask you to save
My soul, but you can't hear it...

Reason: I feel you aren't far from here,
But I don't see you however I tried.
And when you speak sometimes I hear
Your voice and see your tears. I cried

Long years. You thought that I was happy...
What's a pity! You were mistaken!
I shure you know - I wasn't lucky,
By sorrow I was overtaken.

Soul: And why are you so stale?
Why doesn't it look like sorrow?
Calm was end and now the gale,
Not patience, I fury borrowed.


To be continued...


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Интересно, эмоционально, но почему же на аглицком?? На великом и могучем звучало бы не хуже... Но Вы автор и это Ваша воля!

Творческого вдохновения и удачи Вам желаю!

Валь Де Мар   17.04.2009 17:55     Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо большое за теплый отзыв! Решила поэкспереминтировать на англицком, т.к. на русском произошёл какой-то сбой(наверно кризис))).
Успехов и вдохновения. С уважением,

Кира Неизвестная   30.04.2009 09:13   Заявить о нарушении